- The religious jokes and metaphors just kind of creep me out.
- Random Fun Fact: Avery's favorite interjections are "Jeepers!" and "Land Sakes!"
- Yet ANOTHER episode of completely demeaning the heroine simply to make her appear even more pathetic and childlike. NO excuse for scenes like this. NONE.
- Grade was lingering at a C-, but this chapter just totally jumped the WTF shark. It'll take some work to maintain a D average.
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